Disappointment

The taste of defeat lingered long after the fight had ended. That and the deafening silence, which threatened to engulf them both. The chatterboxes they were, they were not used to them silences. She professed an apology, if only to banish some of the silence away. He brushed it aside. The room reeked of disappointment.

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4 comments

  1. Aswin.C

    Story telling is an art and an accomplished story teller is one who tells so much with so little words. Who can stir up readers mind with very little but with most appropriate words. Your passage above too tells the reader so much in very little words.

    Good one.

    aswinc

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